October Writing Goals

- Staying on Topic

- Making Connections



Friday, May 7

A Sad Boy.

There was a little boy that was about, 8 years old. He has no friends and no toys. His name was Arnold. He was always, and I mean ALWAYS polite to everyone, except nobody respected him. He was always sad and crying in a tunnel he built in the grounds.

One day in the summer Arnold took a walk to the lake, Arnold made a big sand castle almost life size. He just cried and cried about nobody respecting him. About an hour later, a boy about the same age named Bobby came into his castle and said “Hello, why are you crying?” Arnold says “Well because nobody respects me and I have no friends, anyway why are you talking to me?" “Because, you looked lonely and I wanted to be your friend.” Says Bobby.

Bobby and Arnold continue walking along the beach talking about their lives being lonely and people picking on them. They are with each other everyday. They have the same lives and they are like brothers. They're like best friends! But one day Arnold heard bobby talking to himself saying that Arnold was Dumb and ugly!

The next morning Bobby found Arnold back in his castle crying. Bobby apologized over and over until he talked. After a million times asking to be friends again. They became the best of friends. They stood up for each other and played everyday. Until they died together of old age at 104 years old!

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