Choir club is a place where you sing/dance. Last year in choir we didn't dance we just sang amazing songs, my most favorite songs were Seasons of Love, Lean on Me, and And this shall be for Music.I think choir is an amazing thing is because Mrs. Stingle teaches it.
You can kind of express yourself when you sing. When I first started choir I was sort of shy to sing. When I started practicing and singing louder a little more I got better. So then I came to choir club.
I'm in choir club 7th and 8th Grade. My first year in choir club was amazing. We went to Great America, and the contest. That was the best time ever. But the only bad thing about it was that we had to get up at school time, on a saturday. And I spilled some white icecream on my black choir shirt. So it was noticeable, and it looked like a bird pooped on me. Disgusting right? There are so many good memories from choir club...
I like a specially when we what to the grat America. And then we whant to the six flags. love it.
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Nice Brittany! A huge improvement fromt the original post! I really like how you made some connections and you make this post very interesting to read. The only suggestion that I have is to edit a little more because for the last sentence in you 1st paragraph it should be "it is or it's" not is. Overall great job! :)
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ReplyDeletebecause, choir club is my life!
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